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10/25/2016 10:20 am  #1


Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Hey, girls! It's me, Madi. Once again.

Whether you're a member on AG Homeschool or a follower directed from Delightful World of Dolls, hello and thank you for stopping by!

I'm working on my very first novel, Loyalty, Book I: (tagline title TBD) and am in need of some beta readers. I have a few of my friends in real life as beta readers (they say my book is their very favorite beside the Bible, so I'm hoping it's good, LOL), but I'd love for some of you amazingly talented writers to read what I have so far and make any suggestions, too!

First of all...

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(This is the unofficial poster. I've decided against the tagline, and I'm not going to put my nickname on there, just my full name. )

What is your novel about?
     Here is the unofficial synopsis of Loyalty, Book I: (tagline title to be determined)     
My heart sank. 
What? I was grateful to be able to live, but swear loyalty to Tsunayoshi? What about my loyalty to Sensei Kira? And the dead serious oath I had taken?     
     "What will it be, Xiang-Su?" Demanded the shogun. "Take a mere oath and live, or die a criminal?"
     
     My eyes swept from Hinoki to Tsunayoshi. I had to make a decision, and I had to make it fast. Who would I be loyal to?

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Ari Xiang-Su, an intensively trained ninja living during the time of the Tokugawa shogunate in Japan, has to make some life-or-death decisions regarding her allegiance. It doesn’t help that her arch nemesis, a samurai warrior by the name of Hinoki Ajinomoto, continually surprises her with his questioning actions all the while she undertakes the most potentially fatal missions of her life. When allegations are made and trust is lost, Ari must once again prove her loyalty not to a single human being, but to her very faith. 

Is it God-honoring and appropiate?
Absolutely! There is nothing inappropiate. All of my writings honor God and are family-friendly. However, the theme of the book is set in feudal Japan, and the main characters are ninja and samurai. There are definitely awesome, action-packed fight scenes with some violence, but it is nothing of the extreme. For comparison, Star Wars is more violent than my novel. By a lot. Two of the characters have a silly name-calling battle later on in the book, and the worst language is "idiot", "jerk" and "nincompoop". XD

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(Unofficial, very lame cover. Still working on the Book I: tagline. ;) )

By the way, the main characters, Ari and Hinoki, aren't Japanese, they just live in Japan. Why? How? Read it to find out! ;)
Oh, yeah...

What is a beta reader?
A beta reader is someone who reads your work-in-progress or finished work and gives you feedback and suggestions. It can be anywhere from proposing that the writer rewords a certain sentence so it sounds better or giving a suggestion on the plot. Beta readers can be as detailed (giving very specific info on each chapter and whatnot) or pretty broad (what they overall thought of the entire chapter or chapters so far), depending on how busy they are or how much they'd like to do.

How long is it?
So far, I have 19 chapters in my first draft. (I'm working on chapter 20, and its word count is not included yet.) That totals to 83,283 words, which is actually the minimum word count to officially be a novel (50,000 words.) I'm still working on chapter 20, and I'm hoping to get to 25 chapters. Currently, the average word count per chapter is 4383 words. 

How will this process work?
I'm glad you asked! ;) Basically, you reply below and tell me that you'd like to be a beta reader. Please specify how many chapters you'd like me to send you at once. I will send you a link to a private page on my blog where you can read the chapters, and the password for the page will be included in the PM I send you. For example, I can send you the link for the first chapter, and then whenever you read it, PM me your opinion and/or any suggestions, and I'll send you the link for chapter 2. Or I could send you the links for five chapters at a time, or even all the links for the entire thing! It's completely up to you how much you want to read depending on the amount of time you have! After each chapter or chapters of my work-in-progress that you read, just PM me your opinion whenever you want. The schedule is completely up to you!

Keep in mind...
It's a work in progress, obviously. I actually add in something toward the end that doesn't make any sense in the first part of what I have so far, so I have to go back and edit the plot after I'm done writing this first draft. #PLOTHOLE! Everything is subject to change.

WOW! THIS SOUNDS AWESOME! WHERE'S THE FORM?! I WANNA SIGN UP!
Yay! I appreciate your enthusiasm. ;) If you would like to become a beta reader, just fill out the form below. If you are from Delightful World of Dolls, you will need to sign up and become a member on AG Homeschool so I can get these to you, since I am not allowed to email people back and forth over the Internet unless otherwise noted.

Name:
How many chapters per PM:


If you want the entire thing all at once, just put "Entire thing" in the second line of the form.

I hope some of you sign up! It would be an honor for you incredibly talented and inspiring writers to give your opinion on my writing. 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

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 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
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// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
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// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/25/2016 6:11 pm  #2


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

I would LOVE to be a beta reader for you and read your book I've heard so much about ;) 

Name: Lydia 
Chapters per PM: Like one or two, I have a lot of time I just think it will be much easier for me to collect my thoughts if I get the book gradually.  


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Lydia // Sinner saved by Grace // No longer homeschooled // 14 // ESFJ // Extrovert // Reader // Writer // Geek // Sports enthusiast // Philadelphia sports fanatic 
FAVORITE MUSIC: Relient K, Owl City, Kings Kaleidoscope, NEEDTOBREATHE, Echosmith, Lights
FAVORITE BOOKS: Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte, The Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis, The Trixie Belden series, Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen, The Christy Miller series
FAVORITE MOVIES:  The Lion, The Witch, and the Wardrobe, Guardians of the Galaxy Volume 2, Jane Eyre 2006,  Pride and Prejudice 1995, The Princess Bride 
FAVORITE SHOWS:  Star Trek: Voyager, Star Trek: The Original Series, Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, Death in Paradise, Father Brown, 
 
 

10/25/2016 7:16 pm  #3


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

YAY!! Thank you SO much! I'm super excited! LOL. I'll send you the first two chapters right away (they're not too long)!


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

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 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
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// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/26/2016 6:19 am  #4


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Name:   Liz
How many chapters per PM: 2 plz


Liz - Roman Catholic - Cowgirl - Future State Trooper - Bookworm - Hopeful Future Author -  Country Music Fan - Movie and TV Show Junkie - Homeschooler - Etsy Shop Owner - ISTP
 
 

10/26/2016 12:47 pm  #5


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Sorry! I wasn't able to send the chapters yesterday because a transformer box blew in our neighborhood and the power went off right as I was in the middle of working on it. It didn't come on until we had to go to bed.
-__- Working on it now! Thank you SO much, Liz, for signing up! I'm super excited.

Oh, update! The PM character limit is 3000, which is way too short for even half of chapter one, so I'm just going to send y'all the link to a private page on my blog that has the chapters. The password for the page will be in the PM I send you.


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

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 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/26/2016 2:17 pm  #6


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

I sent both chapters to y'all, Lydia and Liz! Thank you both so much again for signing up! :D


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/26/2016 8:26 pm  #7


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Name: Blossom
Chapters per PM: 1-2, My opinion does not matter when it comes to this topic

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Hello! My name is Blossom, theatre kid extraordinare. I love music, dance, acting, the whole performing arts shabang. My favorite musicians are Taylor Swift, Before You Exit, Isac Elliot, Pentatonix, Why Don't We, and Years & Years. I have 15 AG dolls, which are:
Chrissa
Emily
Abigail (#22)
Kanani
Molly
McKenna
Julie
Saige
Merri (#33)
Isabelle
Rebecca
Rowan (#61)
Maryellen
Tenney
Nanea
My grandmother's doll, Lanie, also stays with me.So techincally, I have 16 dolls in my posession. ( P.S.- I like color, also, though my favorite is PINK. http://cdn.boardhost.com/emoticons/grin.gif)
Status: so happy!!
OBSESSIONS: theatre!!!
I tried being normal once. Worst twenty minutes of my life.
I am.... imaginative stylish resourceful gutsy outgoing resilient spunky inquisitive fun dramatic bold individualistic creative irresistible artistic outspoken involved thoughtful sweet DIY smart optimistic natural clever honest groovy sensitive
 

10/27/2016 2:57 pm  #8


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

YAY! Thank you SO much for signing up, Blossom! Sending the links for the chapters to you right away! 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/27/2016 3:44 pm  #9


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Name: Loren

How many chapters per PM: 2
 


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Hey! I'm Loren from Happy House of AG. I'm a Christian homeschool girl I love writing, acting, taking pictures, Pinteresting, Percy Jackson, reading, my best friends, Grumpy Cat, mermaids, and playing with my dolls.

I'm in the Percy Jackson, Hunger Games, Doctor Who, and Owl City fandoms.

I have nine American Girl dolls:
Tracy Rene
Caroline Noelle Abbott
Saige Courtney Copeland
Molly Kristina McIntire
Emily Natalia Bennett
Isabelle Rose Palmer
Ivy Jade Ling
Savannah Juliet Kingsley
MJ Alina Grace Valdez

My blogs: Happy House of AG, my American Girl doll blog, and Blue Eyes, Gray Eyes, my personal blog.

Reading: A King's Ransom by Jude Watson
"Broken crayons still color."    "People cry, not because they're weak. It's because they've been strong for too long."
--Loren
 
 

10/27/2016 3:45 pm  #10


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Thank you SO much for signing up! I'm so excited! Sending a PM now. 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/27/2016 3:47 pm  #11


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Just sent it! 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/27/2016 8:01 pm  #12


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Working on chapter 20 right now, girls! 

*enters land of ninja and adventuring awesomeness*

Break out the chocolate. 

You think chocolate + writing is just for NaNoers? Nope. I've been eating chocolate while I write way before I even realized that it was a thing. I have a bowl of chocolate Cheerios in front of me, and a Heshey's chocolate bar with almonds or a Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough Larabar awaiting... 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/27/2016 9:29 pm  #13


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Well, it was slow progress. -__- I had to clean and pop my aligners back on in the middle of it after I finished eating (very, very tedious process). I wrote 820 words in a little less than an hour, including the time cleaning and putting my aligners back on, so I'm pretty satisfied with my progress.  A HUGE thank you to my three beta readers who have signed up so far! I'm so very honored to have you talented writers reading what I've written! Chapters 3, 4, and 5 are available upon request once you've finished chapters 1 and 2 and would like to read more. I'm super excited to hear your opinions and any suggestions you may have!! Once again, it's all at your own pace, so just read when you want to and PM your opinions/suggestions when you want to.

Edit - I was able to sneak in 20 more words before having to get off and get ready for bed...  Good night, y'all!

Last edited by MadCat (10/27/2016 9:34 pm)


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/28/2016 7:28 pm  #14


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Working on it now! *exciting thrills* I'M FINALLY WRITING THE SCENE I'VE BEEN WAITING TO WRITE FOR MONTHS NOW. AND I'M LOVING IT. 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/28/2016 8:11 pm  #15


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Hmm. I've come to a pause after 652 words. How do I make this next part more epic... 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/28/2016 8:52 pm  #16


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

*dies* I CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST WROTE THAT.
*two seconds later* That was horrible. -__-
*rereads, dies again* OH MY GOSH. GREATEST IDEA EVER.
*Mom tells her it's time for bed* -__-
934 words in an hour, give or take a few and including the time my little brother texted me a billion times, I had to reply, and then bring the groceries in from mom's long shopping trip. XD. That's more than last night! Considerable progress has been made. I am happy with my work.
I am SO EXCITED to finish writing this chapter. Holy cow. LOL. But, it's... bed time... :'( Anyway. Good night, anybody who's reading this!


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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10/29/2016 8:17 pm  #17


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

*rubs hands evilly* It is time, friends. Time to write!
NOVEL, HERE I COME! 


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Madi | 16 | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ 

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: I may not be as active here anymore, but I'm literally always available online! Just comment on my personal blog HERE and let's chat (or if you know my email, you can email me too!).

// CURRENT ANTHEM:  I've been working overtime ♪ Overtime by Dj Em D

// WARFARE PROGRESS: Reoutlining; paused due to health issues but resuming it ASAP
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// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

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10/31/2016 8:25 pm  #18


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

Name: Daisy  
How many chapters per PM: ENTIRE THING.


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Once, there were children with stars in their veins.
 I'm Daisy, an INTP, ADHD writer with caffiene and a dream.
I believe it is my duty to honor God through fantasy, and I will bombard you with information about faeries until you want to kill me. Ask me about my fandoms.
WIP quote: "Great, no one killed me in my sleep!"
Currently reading: Crowns of Croswald
Currently listening: LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO LOOK WHAT YOU JUST MADE ME DO LOOK WHAT YOU UST MADE ME DO


If you need a reccomendation for clean fantasy/sci-fi books and movies, just ask me!

|Marvel| |DC| |Star Wars| |Star Trek| |Narnia| |LotR| |KotLC| |LEGO| |HGTG|  |Hunger Games| |Disney|

Iron man = awesome, Batman = awesome, Loki = awesome, Zaphod = awesome, Haymitch x Effie = awesome, K2SO = awesome, C3P0 = awesome, Spock = awesome, Eustace = awesome, Keefe = awesome, Biana = awesome, Bilbo = awesome, Pippen = awesome, Princess Leia = awesome, Batgirl = awesome, Tamatoa = awesome


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11/02/2016 8:09 pm  #19


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

WOW! Alright! :D I'll send the entire thing as soon as I can, but it'll take a while to get all the chapters to you, so, yeah. XD


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// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls | Life Undefeated | Madison Grace | Adventure in the Air

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11/03/2016 12:30 pm  #20


Re: Calling All Readers! - My Request for Beta Readers

MadCat wrote:

Working on chapter 20 right now, girls! 

*enters land of ninja and adventuring awesomeness*

Break out the chocolate. 

You think chocolate + writing is just for NaNoers? Nope. I've been eating chocolate while I write way before I even realized that it was a thing. I have a bowl of chocolate Cheerios in front of me, and a Heshey's chocolate bar with almonds or a Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough Larabar awaiting... 

I ate chocolate when I wrote my first 'book' when I was 8....


Once, there were children with stars in their veins.
 I'm Daisy, an INTP, ADHD writer with caffiene and a dream.
I believe it is my duty to honor God through fantasy, and I will bombard you with information about faeries until you want to kill me. Ask me about my fandoms.
WIP quote: "Great, no one killed me in my sleep!"
Currently reading: Crowns of Croswald
Currently listening: LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO LOOK WHAT YOU JUST MADE ME DO LOOK WHAT YOU UST MADE ME DO


If you need a reccomendation for clean fantasy/sci-fi books and movies, just ask me!

|Marvel| |DC| |Star Wars| |Star Trek| |Narnia| |LotR| |KotLC| |LEGO| |HGTG|  |Hunger Games| |Disney|

Iron man = awesome, Batman = awesome, Loki = awesome, Zaphod = awesome, Haymitch x Effie = awesome, K2SO = awesome, C3P0 = awesome, Spock = awesome, Eustace = awesome, Keefe = awesome, Biana = awesome, Bilbo = awesome, Pippen = awesome, Princess Leia = awesome, Batgirl = awesome, Tamatoa = awesome


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