Image and video hosting by TinyPic

You are not logged in. Would you like to login or register?



5/05/2017 6:39 pm  #181


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

*horrified gasp*


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

5/05/2017 6:41 pm  #182


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

5/05/2017 6:43 pm  #183


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

5/05/2017 6:43 pm  #184


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

5/05/2017 6:46 pm  #185


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

7/05/2017 7:44 am  #186


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

Camp NaNo July:

Chosen is my Camp project, and this one is SOOOOOOOOOO much better than the Mulan one. I completely scrapped Mulan and I'm planning to rewrite it in October to prepare for NaNo.
My goal for Chosen is 20,000 and my current word count is 10776. Go figure on my time of victory.
I might raise the bar another 10,000, but probably not. I think I'll be all out of story in another 10,000 words.

Last edited by Mermaid Gal (7/05/2017 8:14 am)


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/07/2017 9:43 pm  #187


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

YOU GOT DIS.


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

7/09/2017 1:14 pm  #188


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

CHARACTER LIST: (so I don't forget. There's a lot of you.)

MCS:
Avery Anderson (Fourteen-yo, younger twin,Looper, fire magic)
Bailey Anderson (fourteen-yo, older twin, Looper, saltwater magic)
Leah (Lee) Midas (Sæbjørg Bærensten) (uses her fake name from WWII) Fourteen-yo from 1940's, cousin to Sigbjørg, MIGHT be killed during Dia de los Muertos by Avery, undecided power (maybe teleportation?))
Sigbjørg (Jorrie) Brataberg (Thirteen-yo from 1940's,cousin to Lee, saltwater power, MIGHT be killed by Avery during Dia de los Muertos)
Moonlight (Moon) Vanligt (Sixteen-yo, light power, granddaughter to Lee, killed in the Murders of the Siege)
Kaoline Krogg: (Fifteen-yo, gravity  power,killed in the Murders of the Siege)
LESS THAN MCS BUT STILL IMPORTANT
Helene Hougaard (Serpent #3, millenniums old, daughter to Andrea Hougaard, who was serpent #2, chokes people and trips them, orders the Murders of the Siege, Signo to the Monsters of Jenn)
MINORS:
Samuel Krogg: (Karoline's older brother, seventeen-yo, Powerless, killed in the Murders of the Siege)
Petya Ovärdig: (killed in the Murders of the Siege)
Robert Sewell: (killed in the Murders of the Siege)
MORE MINORS TBD (gotta finish the Driykl Grotto scene, AKA stop talking about nicknames)

Last edited by Mermaid Gal (7/10/2017 8:04 am)


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/21/2017 3:37 pm  #189


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

I'm hungry.
Princess Lunn won't cooperate.
Neither will Lee.
AND I WANT TO BE DOOOONNNE!!!!!!!!


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/21/2017 3:37 pm  #190


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

WAAAAA!!!! I feel you.


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

7/21/2017 3:41 pm  #191


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

But, should Lee impale Jorrie or Bailey when Helen takes control of Princess Lunn and orders Lee to kill one of them?


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/21/2017 3:43 pm  #192


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

Yes. But they shouldn't die -- well, depends on how early in the story it is and how attached we are to Jorrie and Bailey.


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

7/21/2017 4:54 pm  #193


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

Key word in my sentence: Or.

Very attached. But yes, nobody will die. But who! Will be impaled by Lee's arrow?


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/21/2017 5:10 pm  #194


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

http://www.freecodesource.com/picture/i903/ac236/ReaperXProductions/Girls/1288171134_1440x900_pretty-anime-warrior-girl-with-pink-hair.jpg

Kaoline

Last edited by Mermaid Gal (7/21/2017 5:10 pm)


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/21/2017 5:44 pm  #195


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

Ah. Didn't understand what you were saying. Which one is the nicest? Impale that one.

OOH. WHO'S KAOLINE.


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

7/21/2017 6:13 pm  #196


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

Got it.






You didn't think I was going to tell you which one I was going to impale, did you? 

























You didn't think I was going to tell you who she is, did you? 


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/21/2017 6:15 pm  #197


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

[OUHGQPO;GHEQOPRFGHI WHOOOOO TELL MEEEE OR IS IT OBVIOUS AND I ACTUALLY KNOW?


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

7/22/2017 7:55 am  #198


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

The End?
After writing for 22 days, I have met my goal.
I have a little bit of story left to flesh out, but after that, chosen will be completed, but not done.
You see, I had a nice voice in the first two or three chapters and the last two chapters. The middle, however, has a nice stinky lump of useless dialogue.
Also, there is a certain scene in chapter file that needs to be addressed, and I'm going to add complexity to it.
Once I have done this, I will open to Beta-Readers. When that will be, I do not know.
After 50% of my beta readers have completed reading, and left their suggestions, I will revise.
Once I am done revising, I'll enroll some more betas.
Then revise again.
Then, I'll do it for a draft three.
Then, I think it will be the end.


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

7/22/2017 8:13 am  #199


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 You worked so hard! What's your total word count again?


http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Hey-there-300X213.jpg

Madi | 14yo professional blogger | YouTuber | minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ | devil butt-kicker | Drama Mama

_____________________________________________

 Asking Jesus into your heart solves all of life's problems, because when Jesus steps in, the devil steps out. 
______________________________________________

// STATUS: 71 / 100k | Camp NaNoWriMo July 2017 crusher

// CURRENT ANTHEM: ♪ yeah / we used to be the lost / we used to chase the crazy life until we saw the Cross / and it's the highest love the universe had ever seen / and now the love of God is pullin' us like gravity / one people on a mission / give it up 

http://madigrace.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/link-2.png

// LOYALTY QUOTE:   I can feel Hinoki smiling down at me. "I love you, Ari. So much. You know that, right?" 
  I lean against him and rest my head on his shoulder. "I do. Do you know that I love you?"
  Hinoki squeezes my shoulder. "I've been so terrible to you." I can feel him gently brushing his finger along the scar across the side of my forehead. I remember that he made that scar the first night I went to sneak papers into Tokyo.
  But I've forgotten since then.
  --Loyalty Book II: Pursuit of No One

// DAILY EPIC QUOTE: "If you're an eagle -- a winner -- don't hang around with chickens -- the losers -- in your life." --Madison Lorfing
_______________________________________________

// MY AMERICAN GIRL DOLLS
Molly • Josefina • Cécile • Emelie
 • Jasmine • Ellie • Chloe • Taryn • Katy Christine • Delaney

// MY WEBSITES
Delightful World of Dolls // professional doll collecting
Delightful World of Dolls YouTube Channel // AGSMs
Madi Grace // personal + ministry

Prayer? Advice? Encouragement? Wanna chat? PM me about anything and everything!

--Madi
 

7/22/2017 8:14 am  #200


Re: The adventures of writing a novel.

48057643357903223579993


Laisse ton sourire changer le monde
Mais ne laissez pas le monde changer votre sourire.
http://thegirlwithauburnhair.wordpress.com
     Thread Starter
 

Board footera

 

Powered by Boardhost. Create a Free Forum