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9/04/2017 5:43 am  #1


Thoughts?

Opinions please! Excerpt from my latest novel:

Unconsciousness was warm, like hot chocolate in winter weather. Hannah didn't feel anything much as she awoke, just that her head felt like bricks and her skin was burning. There was something on her face, but she was too sick to care. Then, someone took it off and, oh, her face was on fire too, but she was freezing all at once. It felt like she couldn't breathe, oxygen couldn't reach her lungs. She felt a hand on her own. Then, something cold was on her face again. She couldn't focus, but it felt so nice.

The burning ceased. Unconsciousness claimed Hannah Jensen once again.


-Hallie-Português Ninja-MWC Novel Writer. @Ellieannah
introverted teenager-waffle lover-resident ghost of AGH
former roadschooler, current homeschooler



 
 

9/05/2017 4:20 pm  #2


Re: Thoughts?

Woah
that's pretty good.


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9/05/2017 4:29 pm  #3


Re: Thoughts?

Whoops! I am so sorry! I read this a few days ago and LOVED IT! but i forgot to comment.


Hello!!! I'm Liz. I am a big tv show/movie person and enjoy 24, Narnia, Person of Interest, The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, The Hunger Games, Adam-12, Psych, Blue Bloods, Murdoch Mysteries and many, many more! I am also a big bookworm and my favorite book is The Lord Of The Rings.I am a Roman Catholic. I had the pleasure of meeting one of my favorite authors, Joseph Pearce, in September 2015 and my picture of him and I is very special to me. I have an Etsy Shop, American Cat Creations. I am an ISTP from the Meyers-Briggs personality test. 

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9/05/2017 5:03 pm  #4


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Aw thanks Daisy and Liz y'all are the bestest 😊


-Hallie-Português Ninja-MWC Novel Writer. @Ellieannah
introverted teenager-waffle lover-resident ghost of AGH
former roadschooler, current homeschooler



 
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