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9/01/2017 6:18 pm  #1


24: The Untold Story: An Alternate Storyline

I am back again with another story. Y'all are probably thinking, "Oh no, She is writing another but she probably won't finish it. AGAIN." But I don't care. (No offense)

So Presenting.....

24:The Untold StoryAn Alternate Storyline

Chapter 1: The Following Takes Place Between 5:00 am and 6:00 am.


Rita Bauer woke with a start from a nightmare which occurred every night since the series of events in the dream happened. She took a deep breath and got out of bed. She started her morning routine which consisted of fifty push-ups, forty pull ups and thirty crunches. Doing this kept Rita in shape and helped clear her mind. She got up from the floor and grabbed the clothes she was going to wear today. She wore clothes much like her dad’s, after all she was following in his footsteps, being a field agent for CTU Los Angeles. Rita took a shower and then went downstairs to start making breakfast.
                                                                              ***** 
Will Thompson woke up with a nightmare of his very own. This nightmare plagued him every night as well, it was of a similar nature to that of Rita’s. Will checked his phone to see if he received any calls or texts. “Not one.” He said to himself. He walked out of the bedroom of his one-bed, one-bath apartment and into the bathroom, to take a shower. He went downstairs when he was done and turned on the news. It showed an address from the President. He sat down and watched the address, getting up once it was done. Will grabbed his car keys to his brand new car and left for I-Hop, a restuarant he went to almost everyday since he can’t cook.                                                                                           ******* 
Rita was mid-way into making breakfast, when her dad, Jack Bauer, came downstairs. “Good morning, Rita! What’s for breakfast?” He greeted her. “‘Morning, Dad! The usual.” She replied with a smile. The usual consisted of eggs and sausage, the only two things Rita was successful at making. “Did you invite Will over for breakfast? I am sure I-Hop is getting annoyed by his presence.” He asked Rita. She laughed and replied, “I will call him.” Rita called Will and Will told her he would gladly come over. Ten minutes later, Will came inside the apartment. “Hey, Will! I thought I would save the I-Hop employees from your presence.” Jack called to Will. “Ha! Thanks, Mr. Bauer, but it is more like you saved me from their presence!” Will laughed in reply. Will walked into the kitchen, where his best friend stood, finishing the breakfast. “Good morning, Rita.” he greeted her. She turned, holding two pans, one with eggs, the other with pancakes. She smiled at him and said, “Good morning, Will.” She walked towards the opposite counter and dished up the food.                                                                                                                                                                                             ****** 
Will excused himself for a second to answer his ringing phone. “Thompson.” He answered. “Will, it’s Tony. I can’t get through to Jack or Rita, can you?” Tony Almeida, director of CTU, asked. “Yeah, actually I am at their apartment right now. What do you need me to tell them?” Will replied.  “I need all three of you to come into CTU. We have a situation.” Tony replied. “Sure, Tony.” Will said before he hung up. He walked back over to where Rita was. “Tony needs us to come in.” Will told her. “Okay. I will go grab my jacket. Tell my dad, will you?” She replied. Will nodded and went into Jack’s office, where Jack was checking up on some stuff. “Tony needs us at CTU.”  Will told him. Jack’s eyes darted to the clock on the wall. It read 6:00 am.

 

Last edited by SaintsBridget&Patrick (9/01/2017 6:20 pm)


Hello!!! I'm Liz. I am a big tv show/movie person and enjoy 24, Narnia, Person of Interest, The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, The Hunger Games, Adam-12, Psych, Blue Bloods, Murdoch Mysteries and many, many more! I am also a big bookworm and my favorite book is The Lord Of The Rings.I am a Roman Catholic. I had the pleasure of meeting one of my favorite authors, Joseph Pearce, in September 2015 and my picture of him and I is very special to me. I have an Etsy Shop, American Cat Creations. I am an ISTP from the Meyers-Briggs personality test. 

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9/06/2017 1:10 pm  #2


Re: 24: The Untold Story: An Alternate Storyline

Please write more soon^_^


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9/14/2017 12:34 pm  #3


Re: 24: The Untold Story: An Alternate Storyline

I will, now that you gave me an Idea in THE RP!!!


Hello!!! I'm Liz. I am a big tv show/movie person and enjoy 24, Narnia, Person of Interest, The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, The Hunger Games, Adam-12, Psych, Blue Bloods, Murdoch Mysteries and many, many more! I am also a big bookworm and my favorite book is The Lord Of The Rings.I am a Roman Catholic. I had the pleasure of meeting one of my favorite authors, Joseph Pearce, in September 2015 and my picture of him and I is very special to me. I have an Etsy Shop, American Cat Creations. I am an ISTP from the Meyers-Briggs personality test. 

Feel free to send me a PM anytime, I will try to reply ASAP. http://cdn.boardhost.com/emoticons/wink.gif
My Profile Picture: Is a picture of my (yes, I am writing about these two goofballs :D) favorite books characters (don't tell the others!)!
                            

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9/14/2017 12:50 pm  #4


Re: 24: The Untold Story: An Alternate Storyline

Oh yeah! Lol


http://thedolldwelling.boardhost.com/
http://dollsdisneyrollercoasters.blogspot.com/

My favorite doll I have. Thanks, sis.^_^
http://i68.tinypic.com/15i6xok.jpg

My favorite roller coaster...Manta at SeaWorld Orlando

http://i61.tinypic.com/v42o2o.jpg

My favorite band....Nightwish
http://i67.tinypic.com/wu33i8.jpg

And, the edit I made
http://i65.tinypic.com/v6oolf.jpg
My AGs: Addy, Elizabeth, Kanani, McKenna, Jess, Cindy (#32), Emily, Cécile, Caroline, Melody
INTJ

Status: Rocking out on Spotify. XD

~Manta aka ElsaIcySnowflake~

>if my siggy is now too long, please tell me and I will shorten it<
 

12/19/2017 2:15 pm  #5


Re: 24: The Untold Story: An Alternate Storyline

Lol, scrap part one. I am redoing this. It is much better now.


Hello!!! I'm Liz. I am a big tv show/movie person and enjoy 24, Narnia, Person of Interest, The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, The Hunger Games, Adam-12, Psych, Blue Bloods, Murdoch Mysteries and many, many more! I am also a big bookworm and my favorite book is The Lord Of The Rings.I am a Roman Catholic. I had the pleasure of meeting one of my favorite authors, Joseph Pearce, in September 2015 and my picture of him and I is very special to me. I have an Etsy Shop, American Cat Creations. I am an ISTP from the Meyers-Briggs personality test. 

Feel free to send me a PM anytime, I will try to reply ASAP. http://cdn.boardhost.com/emoticons/wink.gif
My Profile Picture: Is a picture of my (yes, I am writing about these two goofballs :D) favorite books characters (don't tell the others!)!
                            

http://www.setonhome.org/wpsetonhome/wp-content/themes/Seton-1/images/Seton-Top.pnghttps://media1.tenor.com/images/43383630e6b58c7794a15a396c52f438/tenor.gif?itemid=4838048  
 
 

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